floundering
it's an odd feeling, this floundering
like two swimmers who aren't drowning
but think they are
our innate hypochondria
buried deep in conflicting personalities
eventually, we grow accustomed to the water in our lungs
and choke on air
. . . . .
omg i can't believe i actually read this at coffee house o.o .... (and "someday i will smash mirrors")
like two swimmers who aren't drowning
but think they are
our innate hypochondria
buried deep in conflicting personalities
eventually, we grow accustomed to the water in our lungs
and choke on air
. . . . .
omg i can't believe i actually read this at coffee house o.o .... (and "someday i will smash mirrors")
2 Comments:
i really like this one (yes i've still been reading your stuff and i'm sorry i haven't had much time to actually post about them^^;;;)...i think the last two lines are especially effective, but i think you could probably come up with something more vivid than "conflicting personalities," although it does work
~*gnat
you're right, you're right. -.-; i meant to revise this, but i wrote it like five minutes before i performed it. ^^;; should probably go back and fix that~!
and it's all cool, thanks for the comments you do post. ^^
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